Iâ€™ve written about 761 words where the maximum limit for the essay is for about 350 words. I need someone to shorten, proofread, and also fix my career plan essay. There are, of course, instructions and criterias. Can someone please help? Iâ€™ve found a really hard time doing this.
This is the link to my essay: http://bit.ly/2c6YMOt
These are the instructions:
1. Evaluate yourself. Identify your interests, values, personal needs and goals. you.
2. Develop career objectives.
3. Match yourself with a goal career.
4. Write down the actions you can take to reach your goals.
5. Analyze the career you’ve chosen.
These are the criterias:
Fully addresses the task.
Ideas are relevant,fully developed and wellsupported.
Coherence & Cohesion
Information and ideas are cohesive and sequenced logically.
Paragraphing is managed skillfully.
Excellent introduction and conclusion.
Uses a wide range of vocabulary fluently and flexibly to convey precise meanings.
Errors are rare and minor.
Uses a wide range of sentence structures with full flexibility and accuracy.
Most sentences are error-free; rare minor errors occur only as slips.