I need someone to fix my paper assignment help

Hello, I just have received my paper back from the professor and he wrote me a feedback on my paper that I need to fix. I’m sending you the paper with  his comments. I really would love from you to do as written below.  

His comments are: 

1- To fix the grammar mistakes he labeled on pages 3-4 

2- he wants 3 “complete” pages of the essay ( as you can see in page 3 and 4) he wants it in a complete page. “Even no one sentence is missing from the pages.” as he told me.